Elizabeth walked to the yard carrying a bunch of daisies(雏菊)
Beautiful flowers for for Oh I'll never get it right she cried throwing the daisies on the ground She had been practising her speech for a week
Part of her couldn’t wait This Saturday the great Ana Wolff famous pianist would perform at the concert hall in town For four years Elizabeth had listened to Ms Wolffs recordings over and over again loving the way the notes flowed like a rushing mountain stream
Part of Elizabeth was terrified Her music teacher at school Mr Leaf had asked her to present the flowers to Ms Wolff after the performance But Elizabeth knew herself well She had severe stage fright and she really hated it when she had to talk in front of people Even so Elizabeth was determined to take the challenge this time
How' s the speech going asked Elizabeth’s mother Want to practice on me
No thanks said Elizabeth Mum I can’t do this I'll forget I might even pass out
Oh honey Think about it… sharing the stage with Ana Wolff What an honour Mum gently comforted her
Elizabeth kept practising Beautiful flowers for… for a beautiful performance… She presented the flowers to the cat the dog even the statue in the garden
Soon it was Saturday night Elizabeth stood at the backstage behind the heavy black curtains Holding the bouquet (花束) of red roses she felt her heart racing wildly and her stomach tightened with nervousness
The lights dimmed and Ms Wolff began her performance She swayed and nodded with her fingers dancing across the keys Soft sad parts loud angry parts parts that sounded fun to play Drawn into the music Elizabeth forgot for a moment about the six words she had to say With a flourish Ms Wolff played her final note Applause thundered through the hall People jumped to their feet and cheered
Ms Wolff smiled and bowed Then she walked off stage and into the wings Almost immediately she returned to the stage for a second bow
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Then came the dreaded moment Clutching the roses Elizabeth got up the courage to walk slowly to the spot where Ms Wolff was standing Elizabeth opened her mouth mouthing the very six words But no sound came out She tried again only to feel the words stuck in her throat She began to see dots in front of her eyes She took a deep breath and murmured Beaut… Beautiful flowers for a beautiful performance With this she tentatively presented the roses to Ana Wolff who in return wrapped Elizabeth in a big hug
The audience cheered and clapped loudly for them Through the glare of the footlights Elizabeth could see the crowd smiling Backstage Elizabeth told Ms Wolff about her stage fright That is how I feel every time I go onstage You need to swallow that fear and go out here anyway said Ms Wolff smiling Just the way you did tonight Then the great Ana Wolff gently drew a single red rose from her bouquet and gave it to Elizabeth Here is a beautiful flower for a brave girl
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Taking a deep breath Elizabeth walked slowly towards Ms Wolff with roses tight in hand The stage lights felt blazing hot Beads of sweat trickled down her face Finally she struggled to the spot where Ms Wolff was standing Elizabeth opened her mouth She mouthed the words but no sound came out Murmurs and scattered coughs came from the front row Elizabeth tried again but the words felt stuck in her windpipe She lowered her head trying to block out the sadness erupting inside
Just then Elizabeth sensed someone patting her on the shoulder She raised her head and saw Ms Wolff looking at her with a warm smile Ms Wolff ruffled Elizabeth's hair and whispered in her ear Now you know how I feel every time I am on the stage You mean…you get terrified too asked Elizabeth I do Just swallow that fear and smile soothed Ms Wolf Hearing that Elizabeth gathered up her courage and said Beaut… Beautiful flowers for a beautiful performance She handed the roses to Ana Wolff The audience cheered Ms Wolff wrapped Elizabeth in a big hug Scents of roses and Ms Wolff's flowery perfume mingled
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Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body Some of her organs bones and muscles were out of shape No one expected her to survive She did make it but with her strange body figure everyone could recognize her even from a distance
In Emily White’s hometown there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium(礼堂 ) It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town’s people
Many people tried out each year for it but so many were turned away It can only include the most excellent people in the field
Emily had a beautiful singing voice Last year she went to Mrs Owens – her music teacher to ask to join in the performance Without letting her sing Mrs Owens took a look at Amy’s body and said Child you just don’t fit Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable It would make them uncomfortable too
Without singing a single not Emily was sent back through the door of the choral room Hurt and upset she decided never to try out again But Mrs Owens then retired
This year there came a new music teacher Mr Buttler He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try
Emily didn’t want to be rejected again so she hesitated a little about it As Emily struggled the door was pushed open and Mr Buttler called Emily you’re next Although kind of nervous Emily did as Mr Buttler told her to do Mr Buttler sat by the piano to keep Emily company When Emily finished her testing performance she thanked Mr Buttler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day
Emily couldn’t sleep that night She was suffering from the feelings that she didn’t fit and the great need to be accepted By the next morning her stomach was even in pain because of stress
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The next day Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room Beyond her expectations on top of the list was her name Overjoyed but doubtful she pinched her hand hard only to find she wasn’t daydreaming Then out of the room walked Mr Buttler whose eyes brimmed with smiles Emily we had another good news for you he said in a mysterious voice The little girl looked at him in confusion We choose you to be the lead singer Do you believe in yourself Mr Buttler asked eagerly Greatly encouraged Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance
Finally the day of performance came Upon appearing on the stage she was greeted with scornful eyes and even sneering But as calm as a millpond she began to sing her heart out Who knew how many such situations she had come across She was really used to it When she finished her song there was a moment of silence stillness as if the world was holding its breath Suddenly thunderous applause broke out Mr Butter was so moved that he almost staggered to Emily and gave her a tight hug It was then that he knew that Emily did survive from inferiority with her confidence
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The next day Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room She was not rejected this time Her name was posted at the top of the list She Emily White was chosen to be the leading singer She would sing alone in the performance Emily couldn’t believe her eyes There must be some mistake But Mr Buttler said to her with determined eyes Emily I choose you because you should perform the partyour voice is unusual Believe in yourself Greatly encouraged Emily practiced really hard
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Finally the day of performance came Standing in front of the line Emily felt her throat tight and her palms sweating When the curtain opened up the eyes of the whole audience fell upon Emily Emily White Someone whispered Then along with the first note of music Emily began to singer her heart out Her voice was like a nightingale ringing in the auditorium Applause Emily felt so happy and comfortable She was shining on the stage Emily White with so many birth problems in her body was an angel
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The next day Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room Worried that she might be rejected again she felt her throat tighten standing among a crowd of students anxious to know the result Hardly had her eyes settled upon the very top of the list when the name Emily White abruptly popped into her sight It was so incredible that she rubbed her eyes over and over again to ensure it was the right Emily White she was looking for Realizing there was not a second Emily White in the school she jumped up and let out a cry of exhilaration What made her even more surprised was that Mr Buttler told her she was the lead singer in the performance
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Finally the day of performance came When all the performers did the last rehearsal in the choral room Emily seemed to be quite confident about the upcoming performance However as she stepped onto the stage spotlight fixed upon her a sense of embarrassment and uneasiness flashed across her again Gradually she found herself clumsy and even dizzy standing in the center of the stage Just at that moment she got a glimpse of Mr Buttler in the corner of the hall who shot Emily a determined look and then clapped loudly to give her a cheer Taking a deep breath Emily with her eyes closed started to sing Immediately the whole auditorium erupted into applause Their performance turned out to be a great success
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Finally the day of performance cameStaggering to the stage Emily managed to curved her lips into an elegant arc to disguise her inner restlessness Her strange body triggered a buzzing noise which added to her anxiety Beady sweat oozing(oozeseep) from forehead Emily clutched her sleeves to ease her anxiety and eventually sang a first tone A hush descended around the crowds and what followed was a wave of thunderous applause Singing in melodious voice Emily let her tears of joy splatter freely and through her blurred vision she visualized a brilliant prospect where she was no longer a disabled girl but a singing elf shining permanently
The next day Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room Her eyes landing(落)on and fixing at(盯着)the wordEmily she screamed in highpitched(尖声)voice and sprang up(跳起)like an exhilarated(兴奋激动)elf(精灵) However the memory of Mrs Owen’s words flickered(摇曳闪烁)across her mind casting a surge of gloom(忧郁)over her heartWhat if anyone laugh at me and I fail murmured nervously Emily’s prior excitement gave way to increasing anxiety She shuffled away from the choral roomtorn between anticipation to show her remarkable talent and anxiety of being teased But ultimately an irresistible urge to sing grabbed her and she determined to achieve a perfect performance
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