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问西欧客般处理封邮件时间23秒致扫眼重邮件般马仔细阅读回复太重会outlook里标注处理具体时间然inbox拉相应子目录里换句话说客邮箱址找right person开发信停留眼前23秒决定命运时刻种情况试问敢敢邮件写长?
2)没明确题明确题会客根没兴趣开陌生邮件需验容言简意赅直接吸引
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题邮件哇home depot供应商找太棒应该合作机会原供应商更?开邮件概率会非常非常说题设置处客暂时回邮件放收件箱里某天突然想报报价容易找封邮件关键词输入home depot保证子找
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朋友会反问完全写呢?回答定具体情况果公司突出优势写笔带样写:We supply solar lights for Home Depot with high quality and competitive price Hope to cooperate with you
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举例子吧前招助理时候会考email水中文意思告诉然英文模拟封邮件容简单写封邮件告诉客Mike次收样品已寄工厂工厂说材料ABSPP价格需重新核算期原材料涨价希您快确认采购原材料安排生产
第应聘者样写:
Dear Mike
This is Jenny from EDF Co Ltd We're so pleased to receive your samples I already sent them to our factory last week and was informed the real material is PP not ABS as you mentioned last time What's the matter
I'll give you reply as soon as we get the offer from the factory It will take several days Please be more patient But they also told me the raw material increased these days Could you please confirm the price quickly after you get it We'll purchase the raw material and do the production immediately
Looking forward to your reply Thank you
Best regards
Jenny
封邮件写?老实说然动语态称点容点表达算通词汇挺简单难懂点啰嗦?果简单点更?第二位应聘者写email:
Dear Mike
How are you
We received your all samples The factory checked the details and found the material was PP not ABS as you told
Please give them some more time to recheck the price because the material is different from the past orders However the material was increased very quickly Therefore please kindly place the order soon if the price is ok for you We'll do production asap
Thank you in advance
Kind regards
Tommy
封呢?觉封号点毕竟动动语态结合We出现次算太枯燥容稍微简单点点位重purchase the raw material掉直接We'll do the production asap样更简洁毕竟生产采购原材料?废话缺点感觉啰嗦点会样写:
Hi Mike
Samples received and already passed to vendor The material was PP not ABS Offer sheet is preparing and will be sent to you soon
By the way raw material increased these days pls make a decision quickly to go ahead after price confirmed We'll arrange the mass production asap
Thanks and best regards
C
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