写作务
假设校英语报记者李华校学生会生病高二年级学生张璐组织捐款
活动请根点写新闻报道发表校英语报:
1 活动时间点具体容
2 学表现
注意:1 词数 100 左右(标题已出计入总词数)2 适增加细节
行文连贯
Sunshine to our friend in need
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写作指导
审题定调
写作求写篇新闻报道新闻报道事实发生事件进行实事
求报道目提供新信息新闻报道新闻评时候结合起
讲述事实发表评新闻报道语言求具体准确精炼时态般
时
二谋篇布局
新闻报道般分四部分:
第部分:标题(新闻标题新闻容浓缩概括)
第二部分:导语(体交代新闻事件包括新闻事件发生时间点物等
简明扼表达出新闻核心容)
第三部分:体(新闻报道部分充足事实描述事件程导语
容作进步展开阐述)
第四部分:结束语(总结全文发表评)
写作言需写出导语体结束语
三组织语言
1 导语:体交代新闻事件
普通 the Student Council organized an activity to raise money for a student in Grade
表达 Two who is suffering from in our library
高级 an activity to donate money to a student in Grade Two who was diagnosed as
表达 having was launched in our library by the Student Council
2 体:描述活动程
In order to treat his her parents have spent all their savings However it is still far
from enough
普通
As his her friends and schoolmates many students in our school took part in the
表达
activity and donated their pocket money
The activity lasted for and was collected in the end
The huge expenditure (花费) on this disease has quickly exhausted the savings of his
her family
高级
As his her friends and schoolmates the students in our school could not turn a blind
表达
eye to his her difficulty and took part in the moneyraising activity enthusiastically
Lasting for the activity was a huge success collecting in the end
3 结束语:总结全文发表评
普通 We are proud of doing what we can to help our schoolmate and we hope will get
表达 over his her illness soon
高级 If we are strong no challenge can defeat us We hold a firm belief that will soon
表达 return to his her normal life with our love and support
范文展示
普通范文
Sunshine to our friend in need
Last Friday the Student Council organized an activity to raise money for Zhang Lu a student
in Grade Two who is suffering from a rare bone disease in our library
In order to treat Zhang Lu her parents have spent all their savings However it is still far
from enough As her friends and schoolmates many students in our school took part in the activity
and donated their pocket money The activity lasted for four hours and 20000 yuan was collected
in the end
We are proud of doing what we can to help our schoolmate and we hope Zhang Lu will get
over her illness soon
高级范文
Sunshine to our friend in need
Last Friday an activity to donate money to Zhang Lu a student in Grade Two who was
diagnosed as having a rare bone disease was launched in our library by the Student Council
The huge expenditure on this disease has quickly exhausted the savings of her family As her
friends and schoolmates the students in our school could not turn a blind eye to her difficulty and
took part in the moneyraising activity enthusiastically Lasting for four hours the activity was a
huge success collecting 20000 yuan in the end
If we are strong no challenge can defeat us We hold a firm belief that Zhang Lu will soon
return to her normal life with our love and support
里列出常表达希学
常表达
★ It is reported that
★ On all the teachers and students in our school took part in
★ caused many deaths and serious injuries
★ In order to the school organized a(n)
★ A(n) was held on
★ provided us with a chance of
★ This is the first time in history that
★ The activity benefited us a lot was really good for us
★ The activity offered a good opportunity for us to was highly meaningful was of great
significance
★ all the people learned a lot from it
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