英语期中书面表达
书面表达评分标准（15 分）
A档（1315分） 够围绕话题进行表述语言基误行连贯表达清楚
B档（1112分） 够围绕话题进行表述语言少量错误表达基连贯清楚
C档（910分） 够基围绕话题进行表述语言表达错误行文连贯影响句意理解
D档（68分） 尚围绕话题进行表述语言错误较影响句意表达
E档（05分）写出话题相关单词两句子句子懂
二书面表达范文：
01 假设MaryTom新认识美国网友发封电子邮件询问情况请根提示回封电邮
Name
Mary Smith
Sex (性)
girl
Nationality (国籍)
English
Class
Class 1 Grade 1
Age
13
Phone number
057487341434
Favorite color
red
English teacher
Ms Li
Like
singing reading watching TV
Don’t like
eating fruit running
容：1爱特长
2日常生活惯（少两点）
3学方式花费约长时间
4现晚8点家正做什
求：1文章须包含写作容适发挥2开头结尾已出计入总词数3词数：6080
Dear Tom
Thanks for your email I am very happy to tell you something about myself
My name is Mary Smith I’m a 13yearold English girl I’m studying in Class 1 Grade 1 My English teacher is Ms Li and she is very kind to us I like red best and I have many hobbies like singing reading and watching TV I can sing very well But I don’t like running or eating fruit Every morning it takes me 20 minutes to walk to my school so I have to get up at 7 o’clock After class I always practice singing in my school’s singing club Now it’s 8 pm and my parents are watching TV My sister is exercising It’s good for her health
Looking forward to your reply or you can call me at 057487341434
Yours
Mary
02 请根表格中信息写篇短文介绍朋友Mary
姓名：Mary 年龄： 13 岁 爱：阅读画画
力：会说英语会唱歌弹钢琴会篮球
通常早630起床然坐公交车学
喜欢动物考拉真爱
现晚八点半爸爸正读报纸妈妈正扫房间爷爷正电视奶奶正电话Mary正做家庭作业妹妹正学英语
I have a good friend Her name is Mary She is thirteen years old She likes reading and she is good at drawing pictures She can also speak English She can sing and play the piano well but she can’t play basketball
She usually gets up at 630 in the morning Then she goes to school by bus It takes her about 10 minutes Her favorite animals are koalas because they are really cute
Now it’s eight thirty in the evening Her father is reading a newspaper Her mother is cleaning the room Her grandfather is watching TV Her grandmother is talking on the phone Mary is doing her homework Her sister is studying English They are having a good time
03 学期班位名Paul 新学成朋友请根提示介绍
基信息
13岁会说英语中文
兴趣爱
擅长画画想加入艺术俱乐部喜欢动物树袋熊
学方式
家离学校约1千米天花10分钟步行校
正做事
现正周日午2点钟正朋友公园里玩
公园里正做事情：…
I have a new friend this term His name is Paul He is 13 years old He can speak English and Chinese Paul is good at drawing and he wants to join an art club He likes koalas very much
His home is close to the school It’s about one kilometer away It takes him 10 minutes to walk to school every day
Now it’s 2 o’clock on Sunday afternoon Paul is playing with his friends in the park There are many people in the park Some people are chatting under the tree Others are exercising Do you want to make a friend with him
04．父母严厉？会制定规？假权利父母定规会制定规呢？请结合列提示Rules for my parents题写篇英语短文
提示：
规
原
*直玩手机电视
*交谈
*早睡早起
补充点…
*拥惯
*建立幸福家庭
…
求：(3) 需补充少条规原
Rules for my parents
My parents are very strict with me and they make so many rules for me I think they need some rules too
First don’t keep playing on the phone or watching TV at home Second talk to me often about my happiness and sadness And then go to bed early and get up early It’s good for health Lastly don’t drink too much wine and eat more fruit and vegetables
I think these rules are important They can help my parents have good habits We can get on well and help us have a happy family So they must follow these rules
05 假Ben叔叔杭州动物园工作请根表中容写篇短文朋友Jack介绍Ben工作字数70词左右适拓展开头结尾已出计入总词数
姓名
Ben
年龄
25
特长
Look after animals play the guitar
喜欢动物原
Pandas because
动物园交通方式
By bike
正做什
Cook food for animals
动物园规
1 Be friendly to animals2……
提示词 ∶触摸（ touch） 喂养（feed ） Dear Jack
Dear Jack
How＇s everything going I＇m writing to you to tell you something about my uncle Ben
He is25 years old and he is a worker in Hangzhou Zoo So he is very good at looking after animals Besides he also plays the guitar well His favorite animal is pandas because they are really cute My uncle goes to work by bike every day Now guess what is my uncle doing now Haha he is cooking food for animals
If you want to come to Hangzhou Zoo you should be friendly to animals What＇s more don＇t touch or feed animals which is very dangerous
Yours
Li Ming
06 假李华中学年学时间读初中表妹Linda想解校学生活请学校课外活动学校校规学方式学校情感方面写封信
Dear Linda
I’m glad to receive your last letter I’m also excited to tell you about my life in the middle school I really love my school It is not far from my school so I always ride a bike to school It takes me about 15 minutes I think it’s good exercise
My school life is colorful There are a lot of interesting clubs in our school I join the basketball club because I’m good at playing basketball I can play basketball after class with our friends The Art Festival is also a great time to have fun There are many rules at school We can’t arrive late for class If we are late for class the teacher will be angry We must wear the school uniform every day We have to say hello to our teachers when we meet them We must follow the rules because the school makes rules to help us
I think I’m lucky because I have a great school
Yours
Li Hua
07 Mike 学生活遇问题知道该办请说出问题帮助出出意 点：
1 喜欢篮球相机体育俱乐部妈妈认样学
2 作业太天晚睡觉必须早起床睡眠够样健康
3 学校太规定总快乐
4 请提出两点建议 求：
1 逐字逐句翻译
2 6080 词左右
3 文章开头已出
参考词汇：be bad for sth enough 足够 have fun 快乐
Mike has many problems now ____________________________________________
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书面表达评分标准（15 分）
A档（1315分） 够围绕话题进行表述语言基误行连贯表达清楚
B档（1112分） 够围绕话题进行表述语言少量错误表达基连贯清楚
C档（910分） 够基围绕话题进行表述语言表达错误行文连贯影响句意理解
D档（68分） 尚围绕话题进行表述语言错误较影响句意表达
E档（05分）写出话题相关单词两句子句子懂
二书面表达范文：
01 假设MaryTom新认识美国网友发封电子邮件询问情况请根提示回封电邮
Name
Mary Smith
Sex (性)
girl
Nationality (国籍)
English
Class
Class 1 Grade 1
Age
13
Phone number
057487341434
Favorite color
red
English teacher
Ms Li
Like
singing reading watching TV
Don’t like
eating fruit running
容：1爱特长
2日常生活惯（少两点）
3学方式花费约长时间
4现晚8点家正做什
求：1文章须包含写作容适发挥2开头结尾已出计入总词数3词数：6080
Dear Tom
Thanks for your email I am very happy to tell you something about myself
My name is Mary Smith I’m a 13yearold English girl I’m studying in Class 1 Grade 1 My English teacher is Ms Li and she is very kind to us I like red best and I have many hobbies like singing reading and watching TV I can sing very well But I don’t like running or eating fruit Every morning it takes me 20 minutes to walk to my school so I have to get up at 7 o’clock After class I always practice singing in my school’s singing club Now it’s 8 pm and my parents are watching TV My sister is exercising It’s good for her health
Looking forward to your reply or you can call me at 057487341434
Yours
Mary
02 请根表格中信息写篇短文介绍朋友Mary
姓名：Mary 年龄： 13 岁 爱：阅读画画
力：会说英语会唱歌弹钢琴会篮球
通常早630起床然坐公交车学
喜欢动物考拉真爱
现晚八点半爸爸正读报纸妈妈正扫房间爷爷正电视奶奶正电话Mary正做家庭作业妹妹正学英语
I have a good friend Her name is Mary She is thirteen years old She likes reading and she is good at drawing pictures She can also speak English She can sing and play the piano well but she can’t play basketball
She usually gets up at 630 in the morning Then she goes to school by bus It takes her about 10 minutes Her favorite animals are koalas because they are really cute
Now it’s eight thirty in the evening Her father is reading a newspaper Her mother is cleaning the room Her grandfather is watching TV Her grandmother is talking on the phone Mary is doing her homework Her sister is studying English They are having a good time
03 学期班位名Paul 新学成朋友请根提示介绍
基信息
13岁会说英语中文
兴趣爱
擅长画画想加入艺术俱乐部喜欢动物树袋熊
学方式
家离学校约1千米天花10分钟步行校
正做事
现正周日午2点钟正朋友公园里玩
公园里正做事情：…
I have a new friend this term His name is Paul He is 13 years old He can speak English and Chinese Paul is good at drawing and he wants to join an art club He likes koalas very much
His home is close to the school It’s about one kilometer away It takes him 10 minutes to walk to school every day
Now it’s 2 o’clock on Sunday afternoon Paul is playing with his friends in the park There are many people in the park Some people are chatting under the tree Others are exercising Do you want to make a friend with him
04．父母严厉？会制定规？假权利父母定规会制定规呢？请结合列提示Rules for my parents题写篇英语短文
提示：
规
原
*直玩手机电视
*交谈
*早睡早起
补充点…
*拥惯
*建立幸福家庭
…
求：(3) 需补充少条规原
Rules for my parents
My parents are very strict with me and they make so many rules for me I think they need some rules too
First don’t keep playing on the phone or watching TV at home Second talk to me often about my happiness and sadness And then go to bed early and get up early It’s good for health Lastly don’t drink too much wine and eat more fruit and vegetables
I think these rules are important They can help my parents have good habits We can get on well and help us have a happy family So they must follow these rules
05 假Ben叔叔杭州动物园工作请根表中容写篇短文朋友Jack介绍Ben工作字数70词左右适拓展开头结尾已出计入总词数
姓名
Ben
年龄
25
特长
Look after animals play the guitar
喜欢动物原
Pandas because
动物园交通方式
By bike
正做什
Cook food for animals
动物园规
1 Be friendly to animals2……
提示词 ∶触摸（ touch） 喂养（feed ） Dear Jack
Dear Jack
How＇s everything going I＇m writing to you to tell you something about my uncle Ben
He is25 years old and he is a worker in Hangzhou Zoo So he is very good at looking after animals Besides he also plays the guitar well His favorite animal is pandas because they are really cute My uncle goes to work by bike every day Now guess what is my uncle doing now Haha he is cooking food for animals
If you want to come to Hangzhou Zoo you should be friendly to animals What＇s more don＇t touch or feed animals which is very dangerous
Yours
Li Ming
06 假李华中学年学时间读初中表妹Linda想解校学生活请学校课外活动学校校规学方式学校情感方面写封信
Dear Linda
I’m glad to receive your last letter I’m also excited to tell you about my life in the middle school I really love my school It is not far from my school so I always ride a bike to school It takes me about 15 minutes I think it’s good exercise
My school life is colorful There are a lot of interesting clubs in our school I join the basketball club because I’m good at playing basketball I can play basketball after class with our friends The Art Festival is also a great time to have fun There are many rules at school We can’t arrive late for class If we are late for class the teacher will be angry We must wear the school uniform every day We have to say hello to our teachers when we meet them We must follow the rules because the school makes rules to help us
I think I’m lucky because I have a great school
Yours
Li Hua
07 Mike 学生活遇问题知道该办请说出问题帮助出出意 点：
1 喜欢篮球相机体育俱乐部妈妈认样学
2 作业太天晚睡觉必须早起床睡眠够样健康
3 学校太规定总快乐
4 请提出两点建议 求：
1 逐字逐句翻译
2 6080 词左右
3 文章开头已出
参考词汇：be bad for sth enough 足够 have fun 快乐
Mike has many problems now ____________________________________________
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