Ecmdwqk托福写作辅导材料
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托福写作辅导材料
托福作文务描述： 托福作文务描述
托福作文求参加考试者 30 分钟进行审题写作检查等写作字数 220 300 字 分数段： 0 分1 分 15 分2 分25 分3 分35 分4 分45 分5 分55 分6 分 写作求： 6 分：Demonstrate clear competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels though it may have occasional errors展示出较高写作 展示出较高写作 修辞句法等方面达定水文章允许出现错误 力修辞句法等方面达定水文章允许出现错误 Effectively addresses the writing task 文章切题观点明确 Well organized and well developed 段落组织序合理展开说明 Uses clear appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas 正确事例支 持点说明观点 Displays consistent facility in the use of language 够流畅连贯语言 Demonstrate syntactic variety and appropriate word choice 句式样词准确 5 分：Demonstrate competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels though it will probably have occasional errors 修辞句法方面定表 修辞 达力文章偶然会错误 达力文章偶然会错误 may addresses some parts of the writing task more effectively than others 效 求协作某部分欠缺 generally well organized and well developed 段落组织基序合理展开说明 Uses clear details to support a thesis or illustrate an ideas 事例支持点说明 观点 Displays facility in the use of language 展现出语言力 Demonstrate some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary 句式词汇变化 4 分：demonstrate minimal competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactical levels 展示出写作力修辞句法力般 Addresses the writing topic adequately but may slightly parts of the task Is adequately organized and developed
Uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea Demonstrate adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage May contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning 3 分： demonstrate some developing competence in writing but it remains flawed on either the rhetorical or syntactical level or both Inadequate organization or development Inappropriate or insufficient details to support or illustrate g
eneralizations A noticeable inappropriate choice of words or word forms An accumulation of errors in sentence structure andor usage 2 分 suggests incompetence in writing Serious disorganization or underdevelopment Little or no detail or irrelevant specifics Serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage Serious problems with focus 1
分：demonstrate incompetence in writing May be incoherent May be underdeveloped May contain severe and persistent writing errors 评分：TWE 般两评判取均分述托福作文分数 05 分晋 级会出现点五分情况两阅卷分数差距 2 分 2 分时会第 三分出现例前两分数分 3 分 5 分会评卷
托福作文范围类型
托福作文范围相固定年 ETS 会网站公布更新写作题目范围参加考 试者参考题目进行准备现 185 题目 类型：根题目致分成 5 种类型 () 立式观点 例 1 Some people like to work or study at night others like to work or study during the day Which do you prefer work or study at night or during the day Give specific reasons and examples to illustrate your answer 例 2 Some high schools require all students to wear uniforms other high schools permit students to choose to what to wear in the school Which of these two school policies do you think is better Use specific reasons and examples to illustrate your answer (二) 单性观点 例 1 Do you agree or disagree following statement people should always show their strong emotions (such as excitement anger or joy) Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 例 2 Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer (三) 选择性观点 例 1People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life Some read some exercise others work in their gardens What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress 例 2 If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition what would your choose Why Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer (四) 类 例 1： A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community Do you support or oppose the factory Explain your position 例 2：When people move to another country some of them decided to follow the customs of the new country others prefer to keep their own customs Compare these two choices Which one do you prefer Support your answer with specific details (五) 列举证类 例 1 What are some of the qualities of a good parent
Use specific details and examples to explain your answer 例 2： What changes would you make your hometown more appealing to people of your age Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
相应作文类型开头（ 相应作文类型开头（introduction） ） 开头非常典型 果没更开头样开头背诵 定遇 类题目时写飞快 （） 立观点文章开头 1 It is true that some people hold the opinion (1) that working or studying at night is effective Others believe (2) that working or studying during the day has more advantages I reckon they both have their strong reasons on their arguments As far as I am concerned the former the latter would be more preferable than the latterthe former
义词词组 (1) have the point of view that_____ hold the idea that_____ support the idea that ______ vote for the opinion that _____ do not doubt that like to choose doing something prefer to believe that ______ tend to think that ______ give their the view that _____ stick to the belief that stand behind the idea that ______ (2) believe argue claim deem suggest reckon see debate proclaim consider emphasize advocate promote feel consent assumethink 两组词词汇引出观点常词组文章开头 文章中间结尾部分请家熟练掌握运胆运 胆运 胆运 (3) it is wiser to choose ____________ than to choose ________ (4) It is advisable to advocate _______ than to support _______ (5) It is more sagacious to choose ______ than to choose _____ 2 There are different views concerningconsideringregardingabout the above issue Some __________ Others _________ … But the advantagesmeritsstrong points of A are more obvious than those of B 3 Nowhere in the world has the issue of ______ been so much debateddiscussedargued like in our societycountry Some __________ Others _________ … But the advantages of A are more obvious than those of B 4 Never in the world has the issueproblemquestion of ______ been so much debateddiscussedargued like in our time Some __________ Others _________ … But the advantages of A are more obvious than those of B 5 There are different views concerningconsideringregardingabout the above issue Some __________ Others _________ But in my partas for meas to me personally would like to give my support to ___________ （二）单性观点文章开头： 实单性观点变成类似立性观点应立性观点办法开头 例子中第题目例 开头： 1 As for the above statement some people would say that people should always show their strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy others I guess would probably oppose that op
inion As for my part I would deem that people should not always show their strong emotions The reasons are presented as
follows (单观点变成立观点然表明立场) 2 Although many people debate that people should always show their strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy some people would doubt that it is a good manner to always show their strong emotions I personally agree with the latter (单观点变成立观点然表明立场) 3 It is not advisable to always show one’s strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy People should sometimes restrict themselves not let them go at any time My argument would definitely convince some them to control them at some occasions （首先否定然表明观点外种方法解释） 4 It is true that people are of many strong emotions But a decent person would not always show his strong feelings such as excitement anger or joy Do you want other people regard you as a rude guy Of course not （换种反面说法） 换种反面说法） 5 I do not think the majority can accept the idea that people should always show their strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy I am one of them(直接反 拉帮结派方式孤立) （三） 选择性观点文章开头 选择性观点文章开头利立性观点文章开头 1 Every one has his stress in modern life Different people have diverse ways to get rid of their stress Some read some exercise and others work in their gardens From my experience I would recommend people shake off their stress in the following ways (
划 线部分种转换) 2 Each and every country has some unique things to represent its own features If I were asked to select one thing to represent my to an international exhibition I would choose a terracotta warrior unearthed from the tomb of Qin Shihuang the first emperor of China the first ruler of Qin dynasty 2000 years ago 3 There are many things that can represent my country I f I were asked to choose only one thing I would without hesitation recommend a model of the Great Wall Why is that You will see as I explain it as follows ( 四) 性观点 1 Building a large factory near my community will certainly bring a lot of changes to the community It definitely has its advantages and disadvantages But from my point of view I do not think it is a good idea I would like to say that it would transform our community in a bad way 2 Although building a large factory near my community would in a sense have some negative effects I consider that it would also benefit our community in many ways It would offer a lot of opportunities to our community （五） 列举证类 1．A good parent must have as many as possible good qualities but I deem he must as least be a responsible full of love humorous patient person 2 To make
my hometown more attractive to young people of my age say in thirties there are many things to be changed But I would at least change such things as sports facilities entertainment facilities parks clubs etc
类文章中间段落证相似关键学会展开讨 展开种方法： 1． 正说+反说法： 2． 列举事例法 3． 假设情形法 现家推荐较范文： 选择性观点型 Topic 95 Page 75 Some people believe that money spent on space benefits all humanity Others take the opposite view and say that money for this type of research is wasted Discuss these two positions using examples tell which view you agree with and explain why Topic 36 page 58 Developments in transportation such as the invention of the automobile have had an enormous impact on modern society Choose another development in transportation that you think is of great importance Give reasons for your selection
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七夕古诗惯咏星月悲情吾生晚世态炎凉已透矣情成空 作挥手袖底风罢夜窗外风雨晦吾独坐陋室听曲尘缘合 成诗韵首觉放诸古独风韵书纸毕卧凄然入梦乙 酉年七月初七 啸记
托福写作辅导材料
托福作文务描述： 托福作文务描述
托福作文求参加考试者 30 分钟进行审题写作检查等写作字数 220 300 字 分数段： 0 分1 分 15 分2 分25 分3 分35 分4 分45 分5 分55 分6 分 写作求： 6 分：Demonstrate clear competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels though it may have occasional errors展示出较高写作 展示出较高写作 修辞句法等方面达定水文章允许出现错误 力修辞句法等方面达定水文章允许出现错误 Effectively addresses the writing task 文章切题观点明确 Well organized and well developed 段落组织序合理展开说明 Uses clear appropriate details to support a thesis or illustrate ideas 正确事例支 持点说明观点 Displays consistent facility in the use of language 够流畅连贯语言 Demonstrate syntactic variety and appropriate word choice 句式样词准确 5 分：Demonstrate competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactic levels though it will probably have occasional errors 修辞句法方面定表 修辞 达力文章偶然会错误 达力文章偶然会错误 may addresses some parts of the writing task more effectively than others 效 求协作某部分欠缺 generally well organized and well developed 段落组织基序合理展开说明 Uses clear details to support a thesis or illustrate an ideas 事例支持点说明 观点 Displays facility in the use of language 展现出语言力 Demonstrate some syntactic variety and range of vocabulary 句式词汇变化 4 分：demonstrate minimal competence in writing on both the rhetorical and syntactical levels 展示出写作力修辞句法力般 Addresses the writing topic adequately but may slightly parts of the task Is adequately organized and developed
Uses some details to support a thesis or illustrate an idea Demonstrate adequate but possibly inconsistent facility with syntax and usage May contain some errors that occasionally obscure meaning 3 分： demonstrate some developing competence in writing but it remains flawed on either the rhetorical or syntactical level or both Inadequate organization or development Inappropriate or insufficient details to support or illustrate g
eneralizations A noticeable inappropriate choice of words or word forms An accumulation of errors in sentence structure andor usage 2 分 suggests incompetence in writing Serious disorganization or underdevelopment Little or no detail or irrelevant specifics Serious and frequent errors in sentence structure or usage Serious problems with focus 1
分：demonstrate incompetence in writing May be incoherent May be underdeveloped May contain severe and persistent writing errors 评分：TWE 般两评判取均分述托福作文分数 05 分晋 级会出现点五分情况两阅卷分数差距 2 分 2 分时会第 三分出现例前两分数分 3 分 5 分会评卷
托福作文范围类型
托福作文范围相固定年 ETS 会网站公布更新写作题目范围参加考 试者参考题目进行准备现 185 题目 类型：根题目致分成 5 种类型 () 立式观点 例 1 Some people like to work or study at night others like to work or study during the day Which do you prefer work or study at night or during the day Give specific reasons and examples to illustrate your answer 例 2 Some high schools require all students to wear uniforms other high schools permit students to choose to what to wear in the school Which of these two school policies do you think is better Use specific reasons and examples to illustrate your answer (二) 单性观点 例 1 Do you agree or disagree following statement people should always show their strong emotions (such as excitement anger or joy) Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 例 2 Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers Do you agree or disagree Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer (三) 选择性观点 例 1People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life Some read some exercise others work in their gardens What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress 例 2 If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition what would your choose Why Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer (四) 类 例 1： A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community Do you support or oppose the factory Explain your position 例 2：When people move to another country some of them decided to follow the customs of the new country others prefer to keep their own customs Compare these two choices Which one do you prefer Support your answer with specific details (五) 列举证类 例 1 What are some of the qualities of a good parent
Use specific details and examples to explain your answer 例 2： What changes would you make your hometown more appealing to people of your age Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion
相应作文类型开头（ 相应作文类型开头（introduction） ） 开头非常典型 果没更开头样开头背诵 定遇 类题目时写飞快 （） 立观点文章开头 1 It is true that some people hold the opinion (1) that working or studying at night is effective Others believe (2) that working or studying during the day has more advantages I reckon they both have their strong reasons on their arguments As far as I am concerned the former the latter would be more preferable than the latterthe former
义词词组 (1) have the point of view that_____ hold the idea that_____ support the idea that ______ vote for the opinion that _____ do not doubt that like to choose doing something prefer to believe that ______ tend to think that ______ give their the view that _____ stick to the belief that stand behind the idea that ______ (2) believe argue claim deem suggest reckon see debate proclaim consider emphasize advocate promote feel consent assumethink 两组词词汇引出观点常词组文章开头 文章中间结尾部分请家熟练掌握运胆运 胆运 胆运 (3) it is wiser to choose ____________ than to choose ________ (4) It is advisable to advocate _______ than to support _______ (5) It is more sagacious to choose ______ than to choose _____ 2 There are different views concerningconsideringregardingabout the above issue Some __________ Others _________ … But the advantagesmeritsstrong points of A are more obvious than those of B 3 Nowhere in the world has the issue of ______ been so much debateddiscussedargued like in our societycountry Some __________ Others _________ … But the advantages of A are more obvious than those of B 4 Never in the world has the issueproblemquestion of ______ been so much debateddiscussedargued like in our time Some __________ Others _________ … But the advantages of A are more obvious than those of B 5 There are different views concerningconsideringregardingabout the above issue Some __________ Others _________ But in my partas for meas to me personally would like to give my support to ___________ （二）单性观点文章开头： 实单性观点变成类似立性观点应立性观点办法开头 例子中第题目例 开头： 1 As for the above statement some people would say that people should always show their strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy others I guess would probably oppose that op
inion As for my part I would deem that people should not always show their strong emotions The reasons are presented as
follows (单观点变成立观点然表明立场) 2 Although many people debate that people should always show their strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy some people would doubt that it is a good manner to always show their strong emotions I personally agree with the latter (单观点变成立观点然表明立场) 3 It is not advisable to always show one’s strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy People should sometimes restrict themselves not let them go at any time My argument would definitely convince some them to control them at some occasions （首先否定然表明观点外种方法解释） 4 It is true that people are of many strong emotions But a decent person would not always show his strong feelings such as excitement anger or joy Do you want other people regard you as a rude guy Of course not （换种反面说法） 换种反面说法） 5 I do not think the majority can accept the idea that people should always show their strong emotions such as excitement anger or joy I am one of them(直接反 拉帮结派方式孤立) （三） 选择性观点文章开头 选择性观点文章开头利立性观点文章开头 1 Every one has his stress in modern life Different people have diverse ways to get rid of their stress Some read some exercise and others work in their gardens From my experience I would recommend people shake off their stress in the following ways (
划 线部分种转换) 2 Each and every country has some unique things to represent its own features If I were asked to select one thing to represent my to an international exhibition I would choose a terracotta warrior unearthed from the tomb of Qin Shihuang the first emperor of China the first ruler of Qin dynasty 2000 years ago 3 There are many things that can represent my country I f I were asked to choose only one thing I would without hesitation recommend a model of the Great Wall Why is that You will see as I explain it as follows ( 四) 性观点 1 Building a large factory near my community will certainly bring a lot of changes to the community It definitely has its advantages and disadvantages But from my point of view I do not think it is a good idea I would like to say that it would transform our community in a bad way 2 Although building a large factory near my community would in a sense have some negative effects I consider that it would also benefit our community in many ways It would offer a lot of opportunities to our community （五） 列举证类 1．A good parent must have as many as possible good qualities but I deem he must as least be a responsible full of love humorous patient person 2 To make
my hometown more attractive to young people of my age say in thirties there are many things to be changed But I would at least change such things as sports facilities entertainment facilities parks clubs etc
类文章中间段落证相似关键学会展开讨 展开种方法： 1． 正说+反说法： 2． 列举事例法 3． 假设情形法 现家推荐较范文： 选择性观点型 Topic 95 Page 75 Some people believe that money spent on space benefits all humanity Others take the opposite view and say that money for this type of research is wasted Discuss these two positions using examples tell which view you agree with and explain why Topic 36 page 58 Developments in transportation such as the invention of the automobile have had an enormous impact on modern society Choose another development in transportation that you think is of great importance Give reasons for your selection
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