具体求
a 简说明研究背景(background)
b 简介绍总发现(general findings)
c 介绍具体点(introduction of points)
d 现发现()进行较(comparison in the context of other stu
dies)
e 意义(suggested meaning)
f 结(conclusion)
g 前瞻研究(future studies)
结文中长难写部分原作者研究结果发现进
行分析推断演绎推理求作者具强逻辑思维力英语文字组织力
外部分时态较复杂分清实验程结果(时)分析意见(确
定现时确定假设时)区研究结果(时现完成
时)研究结果(时)区普遍适结(现时)适研究
结(时)等however may might could would
possibly probably be likely to 等词(组)we believe (think
consider) that to our knowledge in our experience (practice) 等插入
语显格外重
示例
parenteral nutrition is being used with increasing frequency as a prima
ry source of caloric support in adult and pediatric patients with gastr
ointestinal problems numerous complications have been associated with
the administration of tpn including a significantly increased incidenc
e of gallbladder disease [357] the data here suggest that cholecyste
ctomy is often required for the management of symptomatic gallbladder d
isease in this group of patients and is associated with significant ri
sks[说明研究背景包括意义]
of the 35 patients who required cholecystectomy for tpninduced gallbla
dder disease operative morbidity and mortality were 54 percent and 11
percent respectively maingot [8] has stated that cholecystectomy is
one of the simplest and safest of the abdominal operations and is ass
ociated with a low operative mortality rate (about 05 percent) a revi
ew of the pediatric literature suggests that when cholecystectomy is pe
rformed in children the operative morbidity is less than 10 percent a
nd the mortality is less than 1 percent [89] glenn [11] has reported
a mortality rate of less than 01 percent in over 5000 patients under
the age of 50 years who underwent cholecystectomy the morbidity and mo
rtality observed in our group of receiving longterm tpn therefore we
re far in excess of what would be expected for a population of patients
whose mean age was 29 years [提出研究发现研究发现相
较]
our data suggest that are specific factors unique to patients who requi
re longterm tpn that contribute to the increased mortality and morbidi
ty associated with cholecystectomy in this select group[作者较
篇幅分析类病死亡率发症增高床实验室手术等方面原
原文略]
based on the results of our studies we believe that early cholecystect
omy is indicated in patients with tpninduced gallbladder disease obvi
ously all patients with symptomatic disease should undergo cholecystec
tomy unless there specific medical contraindications these operations
should be performed in a timely elective fashion because delay may res
ult in the need for urgent surgery and thereby increase an already hig
h risk although recent studies have suggested that cholecystectomy may
not be warranted in otherwise healthy patients with asymptomatic gallb
ladder disease [20] we believe that this axiom does not apply to patie
nts with tpninduced gallbladder disease out data suggest that the nat
ural history of gallbladder disease in patients receiving tpn is consid
erably different from that of their counterparts not receiving tpn bas
ed on our findings we recommend elective cholecystectomy in patients r
eceiving tpn when gallstones first appear furthermore cholecystectomy
should be considered especially in children without stones who are un
dergoing laparotomy for other reasons [结果分析研究较
出结性意见讨部分重容 ] whether tpninduced gallston
es can be prevented through daily stimulated gallbladder emptying await
s the results of further studies [前瞻研究]
5) 致谢部分
总求always get approval of your intention to mention someone
in the acknowledgement and approval of the form in which you will prese
nt the acknowledgement 致谢词致谢方式必须征受谢单位意
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